we were meant to live for so much more..
Thursday, Feb. 26, 2004

andwebreathe

Content/Entries: 35/40 points

You linked back to us. Good.

You show and explain your feelings very well. I liked that. Don't stop explaining your feelings; don't stop digging into yourself to try to figure out why you're feeling what you're feeling.

I saw some cussing, which took off some points. I don't put up with cussing.

There were two typos. I suggest you proofread your entries before saving them, so you can be sure you typed everything right.

Appearance: 30/30 points

I love your picture! I like how the person and surroundings are gray, and drab, and the rose is a bright pink. It makes a good effect.

Suggestion:
Make the picture bigger.

Also, I looked at an entry where you had posted a couple of pictures... they were kind of hard to see on the gray background of the picture. You might want to consider that the next time you post pictures.

Updates: 10/10 points

Good job on keeping updated. Keep up the good work.

Navigation: 10/10 points

Very good; you have a lot of "extras," which makes your journal very interesting.

Suggestion:
Put the link for your contacts over at the left with the "old," "new," "extras," etc.

Contact: 10/10 points

E-MAIL, NOTES, GUEST BOOK, AIM, TAGBOARD. Good job. You've made yourself very accessable.

Total: 95



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