we were meant to live for so much more..
Friday, Jan. 14, 2005

soul14

Content/Entries:10/40

When I first took a look through your older entries, I thought you had a poetry/prose diary. I don't mind reading poems, but I didn't get much of a feel for who you were. In your most recently entry, you typed "Its all just words" over and over. I found that to be annoying. I did come across entries last month that seemed personal, yet had a prose feeling to them. I didn't feel drawn in to your writings, not even when I looked at some of your earliest entries. I'm not sure what your audience is supposed to be, but I'm not part of it. You're too cynical, angsty, and pessimistic for my tastes. I didn't like the cursing that took place in some of your entries either.

Appearance:25/30

Maroon background, image of a carosel. I like that image, but wish it were bigger. I dislike your background color. Maroon isn't high on my favorite color list. It also would be nice if your font were a little bigger, IMO.

Updates:9/10

You write on a fairly regular basis, though you rarely update two days in a row. Your diary is full of gaps, and though I usually don't mind them too much, I felt you had too many.

Navigation:7/10

For the most part your links work fine, though 3 led to error messages when I clicked on them. They were your "breathtaking" link, your link to frozen-kiss, and a link to eloquent-'s diary. (Maybe when you placed that last link up, that diary still existed, but since it no longer is around, I'd suggest taking that link down.)

Contact:10/10

e-mail, guestbook, notes

Total:61/100


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