Content/Entries:20/40

Thanks for being understanding about the long wait period. You seemed nice when I e-mailed you about that, and the link to this review site. I like the photos in your diary. I think you have real talent. Some of those pics are of you, and personally I don't think you're fat at all. You look okay to this reviewer. As far as content goes, I noticed what some reviewers call "daylogging" (I have no problems with diarists doing this), entries dealing with you wanting to lose weight, and entries dealing sex. I'm not a dieter, so I couldn't relate much to those entries. Sex isn't a topic I like reading about in diaries. There were some curse words in your diary, and they annoyed me a little.

Appearance:15/30

Greyish bacground, links box, entry box. Entry box is inside a bigger box, which shows a partial image of someone's face. (Looks like the person has a mass of hair flying all over the place.) I prefer seeing images in their entirety. I'm also not a big fan of grey. I'm used to colorful templates.

Updates:10/10

Everyday, with some gaps

Navigation:7/10

I'm able to move through your diary easily, and most of your links do work. However, a lot of the links to past reviews don't work anymore. I would've liked to have seen the original sources to your backdrifts and soundtrack pages, but the diaries you linked to in those entries don't work either. When I clicked on your wishlist, I expected to see a list of items you want people to get you at amazon. That's usually what Diarylanders have when creating wishlist links. Instead you have a personal list of goals for yourself. This is a good thing to have (though you did have a statement at the end of it, saying you want to be somebody else). I also noticed that your Feb. 3rd. entry (titled "working things out?") shows up twice in your diary. I'd suggest deleting one of the duplicates

Contact:9/10

You have e-mail and notes Why don't you have a guestbook?

Total:61/100