Content/Entires:10/40
What sort of diary is this supposed to be? I saw a mixture of what looked like instant messenger transcriptions (I didn't understand most of what went on in them, and became bored), personal entries, and you complaining about the world in it. Sometimes I'd come across an interesting entry (like this one for example, where I could somewhat relate to your comments about not being able to share your problems with people and sometimes feeling as if you're not in your own body), only for it to get wrecked by all the cursing you put in there. In fact, most of your entries have cursing in them, which is a turnoff for me. You would've been able to keep my attention longer without putting cursewords in sentences or having them stand alone by themselves. I also don't drink or use drugs, so I can't relate to you at all there.Appearance:30/30
Is this a diary or an online video game? I like the characters along the side of the diary. For some reason, they have me thinking of the Legend of Zelda games. (I'm not sure why though, since it's not as if I've actually played them or anything.) I can't find anything about your template to complain about, so I won't be removing points.
Updates:6/10
When I initially looked at your archives page, I noticed that although you sometimes are able to write everyday, most of the time there are gaps between entries. An enormous gap started after you wrote an entry on the 14th. of March, and I didn't know if you'd be returning to your diary or not. Return you did, though the writing's still sporadic.
Navigation:10/10
I didn't have any problems when I tested your links.
Contact:10/10
guestbook, e-mail, notes
Total:66/100
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