Content/Entires:30/40

My favorite entry is this one. I can relate to being a picky person. I added you to my favorites list before critiquing you on your writing, so I thought I would be able to relate to you when looking at some of your older entries. Unfortunately, this turned out not to be the case. I like the details you bring in each entry, but the entries give me the impression of being reports that aren't too personal. You do mention your feelings and I can get a little taste of emotion, but I feel like an outsider who's trying to figure out who you are, but isn't getting much success. Sometimes you talk about someone without mentioning a name. Maybe the fact that you're an athiest and I'm not (no, I'm not going to attempt to convert you in this review) has something to do with my "outsider" status.

Appearance:25/30

I like the daisies and the quote, but the grey background is kinda blah. I'm a person who loves color, and I'm used to seeing that in diaries.

Updates:7/10

Sometimes you will have multiple entries for one day, but usually there are gaps between all of your diary entries.

Navigation:10/10

I didn't come across any problems when reading entries, and the links I clicked on (which weren't all of them) worked fine.

Contact:10/10

guestbook, e-mail, notes, AIM

Total:82/100