we were meant to live for so much more..
Friday, Jun. 04, 2004

lumin-ant

Content/Entries: 40/40 points

I was very impressed with your writing. Your entries are very short, but they're not superficial. They show what you feel. I felt myself pressing on to the next entry many times, just to find out what you would say next. They held me, made me want more...I had to make an effort to go to the "newest" entry and make an assessment of your content. Good job!

There's one entry you made that I want to comment on...it just tore at my heart, and I have to say something. In this entry you shared that you had had thoughts of suicide. You said, "Meant to be. Living is meant to be. Suicide is not meant to be." And, "Moving on is harder when you're a person who relies on the love of others." I don't know what caused the thoughts of suicide, but I do know One who can help you. He loves you so much that He died for you, Jessica. God's love is the most perfect thing in the world. His love is unconditional. Unlike humans, God will never let you down. He longs to help you and comfort you. He never meant for you to have thoughts of suicide. He wants to give you His joy. He wants you to experience His peace and love and hope. Let Him hold you, Jessica. Find more out about His love by reading the Bible; rely on God's perfect love, Jessica, because He'll never, EVER fail you or forsake you. -Jeremiah 29:11-

Appearance: 29/30 points

I like your layout, but I'm not really sure what the "Distraction" part is all about. You have this "light" theme going on, and then there's this word at the bottom, "Distraction," that, to me, doesn't fit in with the rest of the layout. -1 point.

Updates: 10/10 points

Great job! You update nearly every day, and you have many double (or even triple) udpates per day. Keep up the good work.

Navigation: 4/10 points

Good job on having lots of neat extras and reviews. You've made your diary very interesting. One problem... on your "Older" page, you have your months out of order. You go:
November
December
February
March
January
...etc. That's a big boo-boo that needs to be fixed... At first I thought that you made no updates in January, because I didn't see it on the list of Months, but then I noticed it right after March. -6 points.

Contact: 10/10 points

Awesome! You've made yourself very easy to get in touch with. Good job. You have: Tagboard, Notes, Guest Book, Guest Map, E-mail, and Instant Messanger.

Total: 93



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