Content/Entries: 2/40 points

All you talk about is love and making out with guys and cussing about your ex. Don't you do anything else? What else is there in your life?

Also, I don't like reading about sex. I don't think it's appropriate to talk about that in one's journal. Sex is something private, something reserved for a husband and his wife. I don't want to read about it in a journal, especially since the one you're sharing it with isn't your husband.

Appearance: 29/30 points

Your layout is cute. I like the tropical look. Everything matches and goes along with the theme.

I took off points because your girl could be dressed more modestly. Cover up her legs a little more, also put more fabric up top.

Updates: 2/10 points

All I know is that you have 6 updates (you linked to one on one of the "last five" updates), because your "older" page doesn't work and nowhere on your journal do you have a "previous" button.

Navigation: 5/10 points

All the links (except for the "older," as mentioned above) work, but I didn't see Critiques linked anywhere.

Contact: 10/10 points

E-mail, Guest book, Notes.

Total: 48