we were meant to live for so much more..
Friday, Jan. 30, 2004

aviclark

Content/Entries: 18/40 points

Your entries are of good length, and fill your readers in with great detail, but:

You took the Lord's name in vain (big no-no with me), you cussed ('nother big no-no), and you had some typos - which isn't such a big offense, but it's kind of annoying. My suggestion for that is to proofread your entries before saving them, to make sure you haven't made any mistakes.

Appearance: 30/30 points

I've never seen a layout of a laundromat before, but I like it. Good job.

Updates: 10/10 points

You have tons of updates. Keep up the good work!

Navigation: 10/10 points

Terrific. Everything's marked clearly, and you have a lot of extra stuff for readers to do.

Contact: 10/10 points

Guest book, Notes, & E-mail. Good job at making yourself available.

Total: 78



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